- More evidence of book research and direct reference to key theorists
- More media termonology, more language analysis
- More wider context needed
For the second draft of my coursework, i need to pull up my grade from a B to an A. I can do this by taking all the abbove into consideration and follwoing my targets. I would need to try and incorporate more quotes into the opening few paragraghs. I would ned to show thorough evidence of synoptic ability, with fluent and controlled writing.
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